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Afsar Bitiya 16th May 2012 Written Update

It begins with Chanchal calling out to saraswati who is in deep thoughts. Vidya says “Mrs Saraswati Raj, come on inside, chanchal is calling you. She is suffering from a fever.” Saraswati continues to do her work. “Your daughter si suffering from a fever and you are here running your fingers through the rice.” Saraswati says “what do you want me to do then? I kept these girls in my womb for 9 months, I nurtured them throughout my life and one day they leave. I was so attached to Krishna but she too has left me and now I don’t want to attach myself with chanchal…” (she thinks exactly like my mum here. even my ma is like i’m so attached to you to both of you sister that i won’t be able to watch the two go…aren’t mothers too affectionate) Vidya sits beside Saraswati and says “I too miss Krishna but why are you so upset?” Saraswati says “what else can I do? ganga ji still hasn’t accepted Krishna, got knows what my daughter must be going through.” Vidya says ‘your daughter is very intelligent. She’ll win everyone’s heart.” Saraswati has tears in her eyes.
Krishna is towel drying her hair just when pinto comes from behind. (Haaye yeh munda hot lagna kab bandh karega yaar…aus mein itni thand hai, par iski hotness se my room just heats up!) Pinto says ‘Krishna, I can understand what you’re going through, every girl’s wedding day is filled with happiness but our wedding…don’t worry I’ll fix everything.” Krishna smiles and looks at Pinto. “Why are you smiling?” Krishna says ‘you watch, I’ll be a very good B.D.O.” Pinto says “that you already are.” Krishna says ‘yes but I do possess the capability to become even a better one. Won’t you ask how?” Pinto folds his arms and says “how?” Krishna says “Till now I always thought that being an officer means just signing files and doing your work well but today I felt that this is nothing…the actual work is to remove the distance between people. Ma and I have this wall that separates us from each other, the day I succeed in removing that, that’s the day I’ll consider myself as a successful officer!” Pinto smiles, “and you watch I’ll surely succeed.” Pinto just adores her and holds her hands, Krishna looks down shyly. Pinto holds her chin and lifts her face and says “I have full faith in you.” Krishna smiles sargam interrupts saying “What’s this? Your room is being ready, so have some patience. (*Blush Blush*) “Krishna till then let me show you around our house.” Krishan nods, ” Devar ji, if you permit can I take my devrani ji?” Pinto says “as you wish!” Sargam tells Krishna to get ready and leaves. Prishna look at each other. (eeek..pinto ji is looking sooo SEXY! *drools* YAY! aaj meri Suhaag raat hai) Pinto was about to get closer to Krishna, just when sargam pulls his ear and says “devar ji! You come along with me.” Krishna smiles seeing pinto being dragged by sargam.
Sargam is showing Krishna around the house and says “like every girl your husband’s house is too your world. Come with me.” Krishna takes her downstairs and shows her the kitchen and says “from today you can cook for your pinto ji here.” Sargam shows her the mandir, Krishna does her prayers and shows her their room. Sargam says “this is my room and there is your babloo sir aka Jeth ji!” babloo is busy reading his book, Krishna backs away seeing babloo’s shadow. Sargam says “what happened? Why did you back away?” Krishna says “when a girl gets married then she should even stay away from her jeth ji’s shadow.” (ermmm…does that mean in a positive way or a negative way?) Babloo says “it’s good! It’s good to remember the values you are brought up with!’ Krishna says “I may have to stay away from your shadow, but the shadow of your teachings and values will always stay with me.” Babloo looks at Krishna and just walks off. Sargam smiles and says “let’s go Krishna, let me show you around.” Krishna says “No, I’d like to go to ma’s room.” Sargam says “I’ll show it to you.” Krishna says “just tell me and I’ll go.” Sargam says “ok.”
Tuntun’s friends are praising his move of bringing a B.D.O D-I-L. one of his friends says “but bhaiya ji, today’s generation never listen to their elders, will your D-I-L listen to you?” tuntun looks at him and says “you two are stupid! Before she is a B.D.O she’s my D-I-L. so the happiness of this family is her first priority.” Tuntun thinks “now since the M-I-L and D-I-L don’t go together really well, The D-I-L will have to lower herself when the M-I-L shows her attitude! And anyways, I’ll turn her into a complete D-I-L from an officer.”
Krishna goes to Ganga’s room, where she is busy stitching. Krishna knocks on the door, ganga without seeing tells them to come in. Krishna goes in, ganga looks at her and starts with her stitching again. Krishna sits on the floor and touches ganga’s feet, Ganga says “no need to do all this, you are pinto’s wife, so go and take care of him.” Ganga accidently hurts herself with the needle, Krishna was about to see her finger, but ganga indicates her to stay away and says “go, it’s really late and pinto must be waiting for you. Krishna touches ganga’s feet and was about to leave but ganga says “listen to me.” Ganga gets up and asks her to wait, she goes to her cupboard and asks krishna to come to her. She hands over the keys to Krishna saying ‘these are pinto’s wardrobe keys…it’s better for you to take up on this responsibility. I don’t want to be blamed later on. Krishna says “ma i…” Ganga says “I haven’t approved you as my D-I-L, so don’t call me ma. Just address me as ganga chachi. (Badi phenk phenk ke taane maar ri hoon sasu ji!) Take these keys.” Krishna says “I…I don’t need these…i want your blessings.” Krishna elaves without taking the keys, ganga gets thinking. Krishna is all teary eyes and remembers what just gaga said to her. She walking in the corridor, sargam comes and says “Krishna, come with me. Your room is all ready. And walk a little faster because pinto ji must be waiting for you.” Sargam takes Krishna along.
Pinto comes in his room; Krishna has her back towards the door. Pinto closes the door, (haha, look at that naughty look…haaye my hero! ) and locks it. (haha I can’t help but laugh at this…he just looks too adorable) he walks over to Krishna and says “did you meet ma?” Krishna doesn’t say anything. “look how beautifully our room is decorated.’ Krishna turns around all teary eyed, Pinto is shocked to see her in tears and says “what happened? Why are you crying?” Krishna looks down. “look at me.” Krishna looks up at pinto. “is ma angry?” Krishna doesn’t say anything. “How could you forget what you just said while back?” Krishna says “she just isn’t angry but hurt as well. And I can understand her pain.” Pinto says “well tell me how are you at fault? This is our new beginning and it shouldn’t begin with tears, right?” Pinto wipes away her tears and kisses Krishna on her hands, Krishna resists and walks away, Pinto smiles unsurely and moves krishna’s hair back. Krishna tells him to stop. Pinto says ‘you’ll feel uncomfortable if you’ll sleep with the jewellery on.” Krishan walks away and sits on the bed saying “I’ll sleep” (ok! This is not me right there…gosh how can I resist this hottie? Na kaise boldiya hum!) pinto is sad, Krishna lays down on the bed with her back towards pinto ji. Pinto just lays down and looks on at Krishna for a while then sleeps facing his back towards Krishna.
It’s morning, Vidya enters his house calling out Krishna, on the other side Krishna wakes up saying “ji papa!” she looks at pinto. Vidya remembers that Krishna is no more in the house and thinks “this habit has been with me for years, it’ll be hard to let this one go.’ Krishna on the other side thinks “never let this habit of your go papa, just call me from there and wake me up.”
Vidya calls out to saraswati and says “I’ll consider myself lucky if I got some tea made by your hand early in the morning. Ravi wake up, because we have to go to krishna’s in laws.” Vidya goes to his room and sees that saraswati is all prepared for the ritual. Vidya says “you’re already done with the preparations? Didn’t you sleep last night?” Saraswati says “I tried but couldn’t…I’ve been preparing this the entire night, and finally I’m done.” Vidya looks at Saraswati, who looks at Krishna’s books. She walks over to her study table and just looks ona t her books. Vidya walks over to saraswati and looks at her. Saraswati wipes her tears and says “I could never understand my daughter. I always fought with her regarding her studies and work. You know what I heard that if a mother fails to understand her daughter then that daughter gets an understanding M-I-L. my Krishna never got love from me thinking that she’ll get a good mother in law but…” vidya says “your daughter is very lucky…she got you as a mother and her M-I-L is also like a mother. Don’t worry…” saraswati isn’t really convinced.
Ganga and Sargam are in the kitchen making tea. Ganga says “Sargam take this tea for pinto. Sargam says “but ma you’ve always taken tea for pinto ji, then…’ Ganga says “I asked you to take it didn’t i?” Sargam says “ok.” Sargam is elaving, ganga says “when kids grow up they find their mother’s affection not enough.” Sargam leaves without saying anything.
Precap; Krishna was about to step in the kitchen but ganag says “stop…it’s a tradition in our family that the new bride doesn’t step in the kitchen for a quarter of the month.” Ganga walks past Krishna who looks on at her.

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